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Telephonic Observer

A dictation of unrighteous indignation
An inflamation of my inner nation

It swells to grand proportions in
The deeper burrows of my darkest whim
And so it slowly enters in
It's pace is grim, the light is dim

I fear I'l never covet him
For I am wandering, lost within

Don't take me only at my word
My convictions are absent and oft unheard
If I hurt you just now I am sorry
But sometimes pain can be a party

Faith can heal you if you have it
Just don't rabbit down the hole
For on the morrow you may be whole

Please interpret my reality

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  • Hillz0rz
    September 6
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    Ryan Cornelius could probably write it better. =]


  • KrazyKazi
    September 5

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    wow. another beautifully written poem by you, sir. i love the line
    "If i hurt you just now i am sorry
    but sometimes pain can be a party."
    thanks for your number i'll def call ya up sometime!
    -Cassie