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infiel

Sé que usted estuvo a mí
por la manera que ella se rió después
y su negativa para hablar conmigo


tu silencio me dice
que tal vez no debería haber
tenía tanta fe en ti


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Yo nunca pensé que el corazón podría doler como esto

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  • wbiro gold member
    September 18

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    I've been around Spanish-speaking people for two and a half decades... and no, I can't read or speak it...! This one 'looks' nice... reading below it is something about betrayed trust... or misplaced trust, or throwing trust out there to see where it sticks... I see 'negative' and 'silence' up there, that's about it... and your categories makes it look like when you're sad and angry, you speak Spanish...! (they say people always curse in their native tongue, however...)


  • sweet arrival gold member
    September 3

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    trust is so hard... and it seems as soon as we trust just a little... with the hope that something might actually work out this time, a moment comes up like that... makes you want to scream.


    • still.she.waits
      September 3
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      thanks. not scream so much, as go and punch someone in the face. [apparently my violent tendencies tend to want to come out when I am super upset ]
      you speak spanish... or are you a bablefisher like white stone?


  • white stone silver member
    September 2
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    spanglosh.... off to babelfish...