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My messes are an ominous landscape

that sheds its dignity
time and time again

in the saddest of all colors.


If I were crafted more finely,
with an ear for creaky voices,

then surely I'd have recognized
the truth

if it were told.


But lately I find too crafty
the immense portrait
of each day

that lands itself upon me
every time
I lose a dream.














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But now that
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  • ea silver member
    September 23

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    somehow the idea of finding the day an immense portrait, ablbeit a "too crafty" one, is funny or charming. Messes shedding dignity I also like and relate to.