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Inner Fight

Just another hate poem
Just another sad song
Just another hopeless night
Just to make you feel just right

A little hope put out
A lot of soul lost
An end result mistaken
Thank you for all the damn risks taken

Short and choppy
without a flow
criss crossing and salsaing
all the way back home

A horrible aggravated poem
look what you made me write
A self induced impossible to control damn fight

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  • Rosefrn silver member
    September 3

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    wow

    you say it's not good in the poem but really it's fantastic. I dont know why but it just is. i haven't read any other poem that explains itself like this. well done