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The egyptians

Unripe and unfinished
surface shattered
exposed to the open
a soft spot battered

Treasure chest truths
Never lost in the pursue
foundation unlathered
weakness aloof

Caves tell no lies
echo no secrets
building a train-wreck
oh where's my pyramid

A statue so high
A temple so frigid
One block removed
One will be sleepless

Built upon structure
Oh so different
weakness invisible
endurance a keeper

Every peach has a soft spot
surrounded by a stiff fence
learn from your weaknesses
and build a pyramid





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