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romantic cannon balls.

romantic cannon balls.

flying across our boxes.

insults like "i love you"s 

penetrating our brains and

excavating our hearts.

 

we're in the trenches

terrified.


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  • Parth Sawhney
    November 20
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    great writing..n very meaningful..

    u have the shown the truth and the practical side of love..

    nice work

    ~Parth.


  • the-hurricane-girl
    November 19
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    <3

    Very clever and extremely true..


  • alexluvsglitter
    September 16
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    Very interestingly put. Unique way of describing love.

    ♥
    A. R. Rodriguez


  • Xxcant runxX
    September 7
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    Wow great job


  • Tzipora
    September 6

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    i loved this write. especially the way you used i love you as an insult. which i agree with because people often say it as if its nothing, hurting others.

    this reminded me of Germany. and Nazi's
    and i don't know if that was intentional. but still well done


    this is my first time reading one of your writes. i truly did enjoy it.

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