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Human remains

Through the corn of my deepest fears
I cross the dreary straights of those cold heartlands
Through the darkness of the corn crops
The lights appears for a short moment
That fear is ever present
That evil flooded and constant
The dark mountains of timeless antiquity
Reveal to me that misguided of faiths
Down those lost paths of human history
I feel myself succumbing to those graven crops
Those circles of unknown pleasures
Divulge my inner crimes
They absolve my sins only to return in kind
Through the darkness of human remains
I have failed my purpose to reach those tears heartlands
Here I remain
Here I will live no more

Author notes

Photo 1~ "Light's last breath" by YagaK

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    September 8

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    Wow; breathtaking piece.
    Your imagery took my mind on
    a journey alone, to a place I
    felt comfortable. Amazing work.

    Best of luck & thanks for entering


    • Deaths Prayer
      September 8
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      Thank you my number one sexy Canadian. you go you maple leafs woo woo


  • Diablosanjil gold member
    September 2
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    Awesome!! Great piece here hun keep it flowing