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So.......

They are all gone

She's alone

Must go to class

Finally go home

Homework already

Gotta be done

So many around 

Not one will stop

To say hi

Or

Anything else

She's been crying

She's not eating that well

The sun was hot on her back that day

She's going to get sun burnt

So what

She likes being outside

So hot that day

But

That morning so cold

Time can go so slowly

But

Summer went so fast

More people walk by

Still

She's alone

She's shy

But

That hasn't stopped her before

She goes about six hours keeping words to herself

No sound from the phone

That usually rings unstop

Her hand is hurting

She has nothing more to write

But one more thing

Another person that is alone came up to her

Please give me your honest opinion.

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  • The Jester
    September 9
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    who is the other person that ur talking about