My heart says no
But my body says yes
I felt it grow
It started with a kiss
A touch, a feel, a little press
A hand down my body
A warm caress
Lips here and hands there against my chest
My heart says no
But my body says yes
You have me all confused
My head is all a mess
Is this all real
Is it just a test
I don't know how much longer I can resist
Because my heart says no
But my body says yes
Down my body your lips go
Where they are headed i already know
Numb and anxious I unwind
Where this is all headed is on my mind
And to think it all started with just one kiss
When my heart said no
But i couldn't resist
Author notes
this poem i wrote kind of reminds me of a adult Dr. seuss book somewhat haha sorry for the comparison but as i wrote the last 3 lines it reminded me of 'To Think That I Saw it on Mulberry Street'
weird i know
What did you think
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this was a good poem is it a real poem and by that does it have to do with you the day i first decided to have sex my mind was going in all the wrong directions thanks for sharing keep up the great work
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thank you!!
by real meaning perosnal experience i actually dont know.. that sounds weird yes i know but i was just sitting around yesterday and this came to mind all at once so it may be a past experience and how i felt that i just pushed to the back thinking nothing of it. and it resurfaced. but in a sense i guess yes it is personal experience becaus like in lines 18-21 its how i feel everytime when it happens.
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youre irresistable.
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why thank u
read my other poem seduction
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Ohh this is really!! good!! Sweet temptation! i like the way your feelings came out in this poem that is not too erotic, yet keeps its passion level up! Great work!
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thank you so much! its something different for me. i never write it but i had fun doing it!
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Nice touch of some adult/exotica lol I have a poem kinda like this, but it's usually not my style although I had fun writing it.
Good work and the repetition actually made the poem fit together well..mm
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haha well thank ya i thought so myself but wasn't sure how it'd turn out..i like it but its not my usual style
btw what is the mm at the end for lol
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I actually have no clue how the 'mm' got there...maybe i was savoring the taste/quality of the poem
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haha ahh i c nice lol thats what i thought
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