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Sweet Love

I can't eat, I can't sleep.
It's like the stars shooting high over the moon,
just waiting to see you soon.
My knees get weak and lock up
whenever you walk through my door.
Sometimes I feel as if I'm going to faint.
Being in your arms makes me feel so safe,
like no one in the world can touch me.
You are the candle that lights my path.
You are my heart that beats so fast.
When I open my eyes you're always there.
When I opened my heart to you...
You were the one who cared!
I can say so much about you,
I can't imagine my life without you.
Till the end of the day,
till we're old and gray.
You and me, that's who it'll be.
You and me for eternity!
 

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