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Visiting Heaven in Your Eyes

I think of you, and visit Heaven in my dreams,
Like a picture, your beauty's worth a thousand words,
As a masterpiece it seems...

Your words carry me, as if you're an Angel upon my shoulder,
And your warmth brings me comfort,
Whenever the world gets colder...

I rest my face within my hands, and take joy in your smile,
It's a sensation most people never feel,
But one I've been feeling all the while...

You whisper sweetness into my ear, and I grasp onto every word,
I trust your tenderness with all my heart,
All the butterflies in me are stirred...

Words cannot express, how I drift away in your arms,
The pain I once felt in my past disappears,
With you it's like I've never known the harm...

Down and out on my luck, in your eyes I escape,
Into a place where I mean something,
A place for which I thought it was too late...

I have the entire world; I need nothing more or nothing less,
Being with you is like Heaven,
In which I truly feel blessed...

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Dedicated to Brittni Jo <3

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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    September 6

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    This is such a sweet dedication to your love...I feel exactly the same way to me wife, as you have penned in this...Good luck in the contest!

    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy


  • Melee Vau gold member
    September 4

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    tru love

    beautiful inspirational piece, love cures all. thanks for taking me to a better place (just for a minute).


  • Snaggy
    September 3
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    AMAZING

    I loved your poem! Its so touching.its inspired me to write a poem about my love =]