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Hollow

Knock on wood
It will echo for you
Knock on someone's heart
The sound will come back, too

A deep and bottemless pit
Of almost nothing at all
Even with the softest pillow
Cannot break your fall

The capacity in a square box
All adds up to zero
But if you can fill my hollow heart
You truly are my hero

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  • Still Standing gold member
    September 7
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    Great work

    The rhyme and rhythm behind this is extraordinary very well doine young poet!!!