[Here]
Acidic saliva to the holy white bowl
Deep chemical reactions
Disagree with my pulsating body
[Then]
It started out innocent
Though I was never naïve
Damn how substance
Tempted addicted senses
And in everyway
It was heaven and hell's galore
[Next]
I am breathing in shit fumes
As my body quivers to the lack of delight
Instead of Weeding my way
To the fairie's House
Author notes
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Title Prompt #25
A contest entry
- Round One - A through Z by HereComesTheSun.
625 points, ended October 2, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The beast within by oTazZo.
900 points, ended September 9, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - You Thought You Had Me? by shysky.
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i like how you divided it.
you do a stunning job with your emotion
and you express it well
thanks for entering -
I thouroughly enjoyed this and your fav lines are mine as well, the last lines are some good ones, too. I may have noticed a typo in line 22..one too many "his"? that's a great line, too. Just excellent work. Much luck in the contest.
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thank you for catching that and for such a nice comment^^ <3
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prompt is yours.
write away
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