Rest in peace
my friend.
Darkness will
prevail and
seek out vengeance
[CHORUS]
for the moon will split
in two and a new
age shall be born. An age
of unexplainable power!
Mortal beings will
regret ever being born
into this grave time of
darkness.
A sheet of calignosity
will cover the sky
for eternity and
demons will feast upon
the fleshy human corpses.
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A contest entry
- Dark Options... by voodoo ink.
1750 points, ended September 8, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-writes & Fresh writes!! (Gold/Silver/Bronze/HM's & No trophy also) by DancingStar.
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Comments
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Very Dark
This is a very dark poem as well as background. You may not be far from the truth if they don't stop messing with the moon. so what if it has water or not. we may not want to know.
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woww, good job on winning, this is excellent!
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hahaha i see i caught you on a good day lol....how can a poem be so darkly beautiful..well.you have it here...cheers
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Congrats on the well earned trophy. This was an extremely well written poem.
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O, my, pure power!! I loved it, a well-deserved trophy!
Nela
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I dont know what else to say...
WOW!!!
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Very deep yet with truth
Time and the human ways for each are yet but grains of sand qithin this hoiur glass of time . Each carrying its own uunique form and in this slides through life amongst one another yet never often seeing that what most wants most of all cost not a dime .
Will humanity ever learn how to love I ask this question often for it seems like love is driftingf further away with time . If we cared for ourselves as we expect others to care for us why do we stay so lost for the answer is within each of us . Embrace yourself bring your life to a place of love and others about you will follow
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I need your option in your author's notes...
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I used the image as the option. I've placed it as the prompt.
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Did you mean "demons" instead of "daemons" ...just wondering...I could hear some hardcore drums and cranking guitars playing through this...
Good luck in the contest!
Blessed Be,
Jeremy
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wow nice imagery, lovely piece with a very good flow pretty dark but quite enjoyable to read all the same. good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing this piece.
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i like it and yes dark!
great job, loved it
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