caffeine?
check
nicotine?
check
shaking
pulsating
quivering
wreck
checking
your watch
living the moments
as if
they weren't
lost
Please tell me what you think
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So I know I already told you, but I really like this
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jon, are you copying my style? lol just kidding. i loved the rhyme of check and wreck. somehow the stanzas were totally different but i loved how that particular rhyme tied it together. i dont know what im trying to say. sorry! LOVE IT
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Oh my Goodness, This was definitely a different poem for me. But freaking fantastic. I loved it. The flow of this is great. I cant pick out a fav part. Cause then Imma repost your whole poem. Its short, but very strong meaning.
Keep it up..
*Kelsi*
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A very different poem, but I loved it. Really brings to life the feeling of nervousness and exposes the fast paced environment in which most of us live today, where patience is almost nonexistent. Very well done.
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I hate waiting - feeling like Im wasting time - knowing it's absolutely neccesary and trying to make the best of it. I wonder what's got you so nervous? I really like the whole poem, but the 1st two stanzas were the best in my mind. Your rhyme and flow are superb. xox L
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