A Day Begets Another Day
A day begets another day
An hour begets an hour
The moments pass us by in haste
But for a budding flower
In silence does the rose unfold
Its petals to the sun
And lives a moment warmly lived
Before the day is done
Each moment takes a hasty leave
As seasons travel on
Then let us live and let us love
Before the moment’s gone
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful
as usual full of beauty and wisdom and scents that linger on
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Precious-
I am very impressed; you capture the quality and essense of poetry I would like to write.....the timing and telling is perfrect and with beautiful delivery, your concept is deftly woven into the charm and simplicity of the soft spoken word that moves me within the elements of "day" and the seasons of my life.
a Platinum trophy Cinara,
best wishes Darmok -
Oooo wonderfully penned, muffin dear
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Thank you for commenting
you warm my heart
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Short and yet so wonderful and so potent! Lovely and lyrical penned by a most adept poet! I loved it, loved it, loved it!!!
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ahhh
So glad Eusebius gave you a read and wonderful reply; I respect and totally agree with his high marks for your poem. He is a master of this style and I'm thrilled that he loves your poem so; awesome recognition and validation; not that your lacking in either ...your talent is obvious and this poem is a gem. Darmok -
Thank you my dear friend Esebius for your generous comments. Your enthusiasm is always an inspiration
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