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To be a friend

Walking mindlessly through the town,
Looking for nothing.
Just looking around

I see you strolling too,
you and I have nothing to do
so we start to talk,
about nothing, it all means so much.
I remember things form the past,
I remember your touch.

We laugh at your tiredness
that you fell from your night on the town.
You dip your shades
so I see your eyes,I suddenly fell down.
I keep your gaze

just for a moment.

a moment to long.

My heart ablaze
with feelings from the past.
I have to think fast
or not think at all.
I feel so small.

To be a friend
is a wonderfully difficult
thing for me to do.
To anyone I could befriend.
But it hard because its you.

I loved you for so long,
not to long ago.

I just smile at you though.
this I don't want you to know.
I was the one that let you go.

You have your life,
just as Ive got mine.
when I see you I will
always take the time.

We just smile.
My smile is my wall.
To be a friend
is the hardest of all.

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  • PurpleSky
    September 8

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    I can sympathise with this piece whole heartedly. I have been in that place. But it is still true time heals all. Friends are better than nothing. And a friend is better than a relationship that could end a friendship in my opinion. so hold tight to you friends and never let them go if they are worth that much!. thank you for entering my contest and good luck
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    Lena

  • dracula9
    September 3
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    Amazing

    This Is going on in my life right now, i love this poem