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Perfect



yes, the sky today was black
cloudy and restless
so beautiful
the perfect background
for our perfect kiss
and as we looked at each other
through our hair
into each other's eyes,
we smiled
from the bottom of our hearts
now beating as one
and i saw that flicker
of myself falling in love all over again
in your dark eyes

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just thinking about today i do believe i've overcome my writer's block

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