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Treasure...

I treasure you in my heart
I treasure you in my soul
I treasure you in my spirit
there isn't a place I don't treasure you
you are the sun that kindly shines on my empty heart
you are the moon that embraces me in darkness
you are the stars that smiles at me on the pure black sky
but I wonder do you treasure me?

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I gave this one to Danielle and she loved it. I'm hoping you do as well.

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