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I Give You My Cento

a line through this artistic heart.
a mask that hides the pain,
every waking minute.
simply irreconcilable differences,
nothing really changed.
stop saying that you love me
bumble bee.

A contest entry

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  • J. M. Spenser
    September 3

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    I'm curious. I want to know who this bumble bee is. I love the little story you spindled. (Spindled? idk) Ayway, I love this very much and so much in fact that I will let it be in the next round. How wonderful.