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lost

sitting here..
my mind so far away
my worst fear has came true..
youre not here
you went away..
in his arms you lay
no words i have left to say..
my heart is broken..
but here baby..
take it as your token
keep it in your pocket all day long..
while i sit here listening to that song
"because maybe..
youre going to be the one to save me..
after all youre my wonderwall"
why are you standing there baby..
just watching me fall..
you said youd catch me..
never would i hit the ground..
well im laying here patiently waiting..
unable to make a sound
im lost in the darkness all alone..
no one cares enough..
i will never be found

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  • ShelbieSchizo
    September 16
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    I can also relate to this,
    its really good.
    You can really feel the sadness seeping through.
    Its wonderfully written


  • wave1080
    September 10
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    Lovely

    I can so relate to this

  • dandoosha
    September 7

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    Loved It!

    Wow, great Poem! I love the line about you said you'd catch me never would i hit the ground ... very well done, very touching.