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i need you

im a cast of who i used to be..
lost in the mind of a soul now empty
i need you..
you claim to need me
that i see the true you..
dont i make you happy?
tears are falling down my face..
my smile fades as i lose all grace
stting in the corner..
i hold my relief tight
i cant have you hate me..
i think im going to lose this fight
relief bites..
pain found a way out
i didnt make a word..
too numb to shout
i still need you as my razor turns red..
i still need you..
im sorry babe..
but now im dead

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  • iwrestledabearonce
    November 22
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    very nice

    its sad but i do like it nice scheme keep up the good work