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Charging From the Past

Pushing my way from the past
Basking in the warmth of the present
Breaking from the dark everlasting fast
Enjoying to all its boundaries, why with any relent?

Grasping my only couple chances
Hope and prosperity
As I proceed forward with no extra backward glances
My few weapons to get me through eternity

Running a great length
I don't have much to lose
Giving life all it's strength
That I'm gonna have to use

Struggling in my battlefield
I don't need to be ashamed
I go bare handed with no shield
I have a power that cannot be named

Don't look in the past,
Only look at right now
It's certainly the greatest gift...
That's probably why it's called present.

( I feel as if it's not finished, thinking of something else to add)

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