The word most prevalent
most prevalent in my life
was Loneliness, it invaded
I was lonely for a long time
I was hurt, scared, damaged
I'm still rough on the edges
but you came into my life
Everything was brighter,
Everything became visible
The fog faded off my eyes
and now I stand before you
I can only hope you feel,
feel the same way about me
In your kisses I know it,
In your hugs I feel loved,
As all my specks of doubt
start to fly away slowly, soft
Soft your skin brushes mine
Your love saves my soul,
You picked me up when
when I had fallen down
You love me and for me
For me you are enough.
first impression?
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To be freed from loneliness is a great thing. I loved reading it. I felt like the air was pressing down on me in the begining and then it lifted me instead. Now I am all warm inside. Like a log fire on a winters day. Very good write Principessa.
Guardian Warrior.
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Thanks Ian.
I knew you would appreciate this one for some reason I thought you could relate. Haven't talked to you in awhile. I've been busy. Hope we can catch up soon!
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i really like this...it was beautiful
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Thank you!! You should check out my other new poems too.
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stat needs to be start.
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Thanks. I type too fast. haha
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