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Surprise 2

In the early morning
We floated through
Brown tree trunks
Green dancing shadows

Suddenly the sun
Smiled through
Radiance beaming
Rays slanting
Down the aisle
As children laughed
And pointed
Their welcome

Gladly wishing
This moment
Gift from God
To last always

Author notes

As we carefully eased around a loop on my school bus run this morning, the sun suddenly shone through the trees. Approaching the school, the children were laughing and pointing at the sunbeams in the aisle. It was a magical moment--nothing like I've ever experienced on a bus before--and as they got off, they were wishing me a nice day.

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  • Dulcimer
    October 13
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    Thanks for sharing this lovely and unusual moment.


    • Jornada
      October 16
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      You're welcome. Moments like this are all too rare.