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Warning!  Waterfalls straight ahead -----> Divorce Court

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  • darlee77
    September 4
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    Never been there but I am sure this is a very adequate warning. Very cute and funny. God bless.


  • crivanea silver member
    September 3

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    i choked!! lol! haha..this is just full of humour!! the way you put..the warning sign ahead..and then the little arrow pointing toward divorce court! ahhh...the divorce rate always seem to be climbing..wonder why the waterfalls though..i mean..since it is a mutual (?) agreement..there shouldn't be tears..lol..but i guess sometimes it is not mutual..glad i never been in one very clever ...nicely done poet


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    September 3

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    Ha now that is so very true, you made me laugh like a mad woman then and it was lucky no one could hear me. Best to you in the contest


  • Desire gold member
    September 2

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    OMG~

    Now I have not looked at the details of the contest
    but Love how You delivered this Metaphor

    Whew~ at least You did not have Amtrak train ahead
    that could get ugly

    Excellent~ Yep this sure is
    Keep that quill dancing
    Woot!!!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent
    Best wishes in the contest
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • mysticstorm gold member
    September 2
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    this is brilliant and made me laugh...a wonderful twist indeed...how creative you are.

    Best,


  • myrataal silver member
    September 2
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    Being a social worker ...

    AND with knowledge of the Divorce Court, you made me twitch!

    Love
    Myra


  • In Too Deep1
    September 2

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    Lol.. love the irony and the humor in this piece! As always, you give reason for me to read poetry. A most enjoyable read, and best wishes in the comp

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