There is enough salt in the ocean,
and none in these ironic tears:
even my pain lacks flavour.
A contest entry
- Water Weeping by CarolDesjarlais.
1400 points, ended September 9, 17 entries
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Comments
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Oh, short and sweet, full of return to return. Ty for entering this....
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Wow!
That hit me like a punch to the nose. Excellent job. Good luck with the contest.
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