All I do is think about you
Words that I come up with, reminds me of you
Kept my feelings, on the down low
More I was with you, the more it showed
Beat of my heart raced, same time it slowed
Wanna hold you tight and never let go
You don't even know, How much I care
Always compliment you, on what you wear
Sexy and Cute I'm not to fond of it
But beautiful and gorgeous, your way Beyond it
Hope when you read this, you'll respond to it
I mean everything what I say in this
All I want you to be, is happy and bliss
Seeing you this summer, is what I'll miss
Dream you and me had a romantic kiss
Theme had a sunset and an oceanic abyss
I tried counting sheep that Friday Night
Couldn't really sleep, was past midnight
Wanted to call you to see, if your al-right
Tried texting you, but I couldn't type
My heart felt rotten, but you made it ripe
It was either call you or don't, I made a choice
seems I sleep better from the sound of your voice
So I hope this poem will open your eyes
fore you to understand that there's a man
standing there willing to, take your hand. ♥
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel Emotion by PurpleSky.
800 points, ended September 28, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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This was very sweet however your rhyme was just a bit choppy
I loved the ending it was so sweet. so thank you for entering my contest and good luck to you
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Lena -
Oh wow.
Love, This is the most beautiful write I think i've ever read, Really. It's so deep and heartfelt. So, imaginative. You're an amazing writer/rapper and you've got the most amazing heart. <3
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~Hope when you read this, you'll respond to it~ Ditto
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