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Pledge of love



          I pledge my love
          to the one above
          of King of Kings
          in heaven
          And to His kingdome
          as long as I stand
            One God
            Heavenly Father
            Unconditionally 
            With Mercy
              and Grace
              Forever...

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  • AngelBellerose gold member
    September 2
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    for this is what I feel.. the greatest gift God
    has given was John 3:16 the gift of a son
    this is pure heaven love Hugs Angel♥