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But I love you...



The single, ugly reason
words no longer drip
from my hollow mouth
into your empty ear,
the only reason is –
you are the only reason,
and I have given up.


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  • TwoTimeSurvivor
    September 2

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    I like this poem... I am a little confused... Is this a self admission that you have not told anyone else.. if it is I can see how this would fit. I enjoyed this poem and fell that you have done well.

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