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The Sonnet of a Ladybug

The woes of the night scattered with debris
Among all the sunrise's morning ray's stroll
With the winds announcing the sun's decree
That demands an awaking of life for toll,
Where the stars seeks the sun's atoning throne
Avowing upon sun's demands to essay
The beautifying of flowers' cologne
Upon the decay of the night's display,
Whereas theater of the dawn sends it's crusade
Upon the scattering of the night's veil
Giving the morn another maiden maid
Prolonging across sky this sanguine tale.
Right at the end of the morning's own spring
A ladybug took quietly to wings

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  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    September 15

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    the imagery here is just completely magnificent
    this piece has a heartbet all its own
    thanks
    T

  • crawlingkingsnake
    September 10
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    nice arrangement in words, i liked it