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ode to fluff

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sumo
warm lap-sitter,
fluffy brainless feline
spreads his ruff and whiskers with pride
and purrs



Author notes

This was an example to my mom on how cinquains work. Yeah yeah, I know the last line doesn't really "stand alone", but I'm still learning. Give me a break.
"Sumo" is my cat's name. The picture is him and me.

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  • J Macabre gold member
    September 2

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    Who cares if you wrote it right...was a really cute poem about your cat. VERY cute kitty...lookit him! Adorable. I used to have a cat..........she gone now.....