one cut to silents the scream
but not deep enough to die
why?
why cant i cut deep enough to die
i want to die
i cant
i dont knoe why
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hun suicide is not the anwser to anything. I kno it may seem good at times but think of all the people you let down,people who love you,people who would miss you... this is a powerful poem with alot of emotion. Great write.
xoxoxoxo
~destiny
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"a shot to kill the pain
a pill to drain the shame
a purge to stop the gain
a cut to break the vein
a smoke to ease the crave
a drink to win the game
an addictions an addition
because it always hurts the same"
its not time 4 u to go yet. u got more ur destined to meet dat y u cnt go yet
u wanna die cuz of da pain nd hell i wanna go to, tried so many time but never could..dnt try to catch up to death but instead make death chase you for you have many wonderful thing u hav yet to do nd much more smile 2 bring to others
lets silence our screams nd quit chasin death nd wait 4 him 2 come to us
WONDERFUL WRITE
KLCPD
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very powerfull. i like it and i cant relate.
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I'm the same way. it feels like you can't cut deep enough. idk why. but if you wanna talk, i'll listen.
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im the same way. i want to die to end it all but for some reason i nvr cut deep enough. idk wat it is but i hate it. most of the time i cut to feel the pain. its an escape for me. but when the time comes that i want to end it all i can nvr do it. great write!!!!
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i was the same at your age, i went through that stage. i still have the scars.
but trust me hun, you will get stronger.. this will make you strong. and if you ever need to talk about stuff im here. i wont judge.
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Can you spell awesome?
It's brief but I never mind the brevity of poetry that consists true feelings...I really liked this because I often feel this way....
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Beautiful. I know how you feel.
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I know exactly how you feel. I have thought the same thoughts myself and hated myself for feeling like a coward and not cutting deeper.
Really great poem, you really capture a lot of emotion in just a few lines. Life can seem very hopeless at times, I know. DX -
Very nice. these people below talk about hope. but i have lost all. no hope left for me on this wicked world. very nice write
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hey it hurts.... but I do have the answer to the question you have raised here - you have done a very good job of expression here .... but the cut cannot be deeper here beause a brighter tomorrow awaits here... there is still hope
very well written
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So sad! It hurts me to see there are so many young folks so depressed and alone. Dear, just find something in yourself that will pull you out.
Nela
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Nice write. line 1: silents should be silence
and I know why, its this little thing we all have called "hope"
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I relate
Been there before, where I wanted to end it, but couldn't find the strength. I agree with writer below, you didn't find the strength for a reason, rely on that.
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You can't die because goddess only knows, shes got a reason for you to be here still. Events and the road before you will twist and turn in strange and ways we can't understand but I have faith that you will make it through. I understand the want to die and not understanding why you can't, I find it to be life has a strange path for us all.
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i have had this to maybe you are scared of pain or maybe you still think you have a reason to stay
either way if you cant dont try
lot of us can relate to this that why we are still here -
I used to feel like this, and sometimes I still do. This is a pretty good write. Love it (:
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i really like this. its short but you get the point
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silents? knoe?
I know your pain
I feel your hurt
Please know now
You're not alone
I'm here today
And everyday
Please don't die
Don't choose that way
Your loved by many
Some you dont know
Religion wont fail you
Christ died in your place
His pure and perfect blood
Spilled on you
Makes you now
White as snow -
Gone
I think you'll love it...it's a new poem of mine and i would love it if you would read it.
you don't have to comment but just read it =]
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its awsome
and its what happens to me everytime i try to cut to die .
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Very good write.
I enjoyed reading it.
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WOW I NO ITS SOUND BAD BUT I DID THAT STUFF AND i relate to what you said ...really good wrie you should enter my contest i think youll like it...
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ive messaged this one and im goingto say it again that even when times are tough, you name will whistle in the wind, it will be a star in the sky, you arent read to die, im always here
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i like it
i can relate to this so much
great job!
we dont want you dying
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