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Princess Lilly (please comment if read)

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A pure and gentle angel
with a crown of brunette locks
Puts a smile upon a stranger
around every city block

Waves of love and friendship
are shining in deep blue eyes
Fragile is this angelic beauty
who bares the deepest sighs

Softly she will whisper to you
a joke she heard from friend
Tears will flow in rapid pace
when pain does creep on in

Beautiful is this Princess I adore
her precious name is Lilly
Fear tonight is gripping my heart
as she struggles to break free

Cancer gripped this little girl
but her fight is far more intense
Mother left, she couldn't handle
my thoughts no longer make sense

Anger is ripping me apart
as I watch this angel fight
Words I whisper can you hear?
Can someone shed some light?

Lilly of the garden of love
my heart and soul belong to you
Clouds have gathered to shake the night
but you will make it through

You are the lightening of this storm
your power a surge for life and love
Shine bright and strike back my dear
the time isn't now to soar the skies above

You are needed by many, by me,
the sirens are blaring the water main broke free
On humbled knees I am begging,
as tears burn my face, I love you Princess Lilly

Searching the skies for the brightest star
but it is no where in sight
For the brightest of such is fighting for life
and darkness is battling the light

Thunder erupts your fragile body trembles
and I can only watch from the door
From knees I capture the movements slow motion
as I fight to breathe once more...

Escorted to my room as they do their best
I picture our shopping spree
A new wig for you and  3 roses of forgiveness
and now alone I am sitting praying for thee

Princess Lilly one of my greatest gifts
your smile the healing for sorrow
Little hands in mine as we toured the day
and hoping for many tomorrows...

I shall sit here and wait until the news comes in
that you are ready for your special surprise
And I shall wheel out to your room and pick you up
and read you a poem just for you and your eyes

This here you asked for to see your name shine
and I shall do my very best to do so
Now hurry up Princess Lilly, I wrote a poem for you,
and your name is lit on Ap for the world to know...

You are My Princess Lilly and I am Your Ms. Tory,
and I love you dear one, end of story!

Author notes



Tonight my heart bleeds as a little lady I met two days ago (age 11) is battling for her life this evening. She has cancer and was diagnosed 8 months ago. A month into it her mother left and never returned. She took to me and I to her. Please, pray if you pray, if not please hold her in thought close to your heart.

Today was spent enjoying her first ever wig and eating lunch other then her room. She is a blessing to life...she is a blessing to me.

Passionspromise

And please if you read comment, not about the write but to Lilly.
She needs the smiles..I need her to smile


Added by Jeff:-
At 5:30 this morning, a little after Tory had been allowed in to Lilly's room to read her this poem, Lilly died. She died smiling, with hair and holding Tory and telling her she loved her.
A beautiful end to a very sad time.

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  • nykzil
    6 hours ago
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    this brought tears to my eyes, thank you for writing this lovely poem

    I want to thank you Passionspromise for writing this lovely poem, and also taking care of that poor young girl, I've lost a couple of people in my life taken by it, it's one of the worst things that can happen to any one human being, and yet you managed to make this little girl as happy as everyone should be, and for that I thank you. you are an amazing writer, and I think that you will go far ^^


  • Jon Andoa gold member
    November 11
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    beutiful in every way and heartfelt prayer

  • Literature
    November 6
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    YOUR POETRY IS SO AMAZING!!!!!
    PHENOMENAL!!!!


  • EternallyAlone
    November 6

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    sup Lilly? having fun in heaven? you sound soooo cool! you must be something else if you got her to fall in love with you after two days! at least you got kicked out of this world smiling; not a lot of us get the privilege. c ya dude!


  • mooniemc
    November 6

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    Beautiful and heartfelt. Made me cry as cancer has now taken both my parents. May the Creator bless you and Lilly. You were both blessed to have found each other!
    Hugs, Moon


  • george the 23rd
    November 6

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    This brought tears to my eyes. My daughter's name is Lilli (an)... I couldn't even imagine.
    My heart goes out to Lilly's family and friends. She sounds like a bright light for all who knew her, either directly or indirectly.


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      November 6
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      Thank you for the comment hon
      she was a bright light and still remains
      one during my troubled times
      Appreciate you reading
      Tory

  • SoulWhispher
    November 6

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    One finds it most difficult to put into mere words the emotions that this poem causes, you have written a most wonderfull picture of life and loving, great job, Love John


  • JohnnyD gold member
    November 6
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    Lilly and Sara and another are watching out for you Tory

    All I can do is wait and love you each day; and miss you each night

    love you,

    Len


  • AshlEEshAnnOn
    November 6

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    God Bless you.


  • laura0757 gold member
    October 13

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    I am happy and sad that I clicked on this.....what a beatuiful write. First of all I am honoured to read this. I am not stranger to cancer and death, I watched in horror as I lost two of my family member's to this unforgiving disease..In fact I have written on the subject because of my sister's cancer...I remeber how devastated she was when her hair started falling out...I am sorry for this little princess. the fact that she died smiling is both felt as heart break, and relief.
    Its just the way it is. so sad to see so many young and old people held prisoner by this disease...The loss was great no doubt. And there are no words really to express true sorrow, or true grieving and the turmoil this brings in after death. Its a long haul. I work with children,, and all I have left to say is its they the children that teach us, not the other way around...I pray she is shining on her loved ones from heaven where she is surrounded by whatever she lacked in this short life of hers. I will envision her in fields and fields of Lilly's in every colour........for she is safe from harm now, gone is pain........gone is suffering for her..........

    this was a beatuiful write, really and I am both happy and sad I clicked on it...my sincere condolonces.......I am sure she was a beauty......and still is.............

  • UnbreakableSoul gold member
    October 13
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    Oh my, how sad and I am so sorry she is gone.
    God Bless her soul.

  • Amazing

    This is such an amazing write. Cancer is a terrible disease, much more so when it takes the wee ones in this world. Your Lilly is an Angel and may you find comfort in knowing that she will only know Heavens joys and Gods abiding love. God put you right where you were needed and my heart goes out to you for your loss and I will hold you in my prayers!


  • SheWolfNLust silver member
    October 13

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    Simply beautiful

    awwwwww God bless little lilly, may the angels in heaven look out for her, this is an amazing and so beautiful poem, it brought tears to my eyes, my prayers go out to you in your loss, you made this little girls last moments so special, you were her angel on earth and please remember she shall always be with you in spirit and in your heart, you were a blessing to her and if it helps any her last moments were spent in happiness and in much love, God Bless you for being there for her, and I shall keep you in my prayers xoxo


  • patriciarose07
    October 13

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    very good

    I thought this piece was so gentle to my heart and made me feel as if I could smell the rose in the picture.

  • sugarlish
    October 13

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    Wow very thoughtfully and very well writen. You poar your heart out into ur work and it mezmories those who read it. Very well done!!!! I pray that princess lily stays saf


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    September 26

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    This is so beautiful. So touching...and as precious to my heart as anything could ever be. That kind of love comes to very few...this is just a testament to the wonder of perfect love. "Lilly...I never knew you, but today as I read...I too loved your precious little soul. Keep blooming in that garden of peace."

    I love you Tory...

    Azzie


  • Snaggy
    September 5

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    wonderful

    this tear jerking poem really amazed me.never have i been brought to such tears by meer words on the computer screen.you have a true gift


  • trekkergirl
    September 5

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    oh this is sooooo sad. I am sorry to hear that your the little angel passed away. My thoughts and prayers are with you and the little ones family. I am so very sure that you gave the little one... all the love of a long lfietime... And since she died with a smile on her face... well, she died the best way she could have... happy!

    Thanks for sharing this little angel with us. It is much appreciated! I love hearing about people who touch the lives of so many people.


  • ccawley gold member
    September 4
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    I'm so sorry.


  • missin-my-Marine
    September 3
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    nice

    very nicely written...


  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    September 3

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    I am so very sorry

    I spent 13 hours in the airport yesterday and wrote this response for Lilly I again am so very sorry, Tory my dear you are an amazing woman with a huge heart. Though Lilly will not be reading this I will post in her memory. With heavy heart Tory I say I am sorry. Love and respect, Rick

    Princess Now the Queen

    Dear princess Lilly can you help me,
    my face does need a smile
    Take me on a trip so far away,
    to some distant native isle

    Exploring fresh clean waterfalls,
    in the surf horses we ride
    Fishing with our hands in streams,
    spooky caves in which to hide

    And we will climb the old volcano,
    to watch this red hot lava roar
    Dancing for hours in the warming rain,
    as waves crash upon the shore

    At night we watch the stars come out,
    in a show we won’t forget
    Twinkling bright we make our wish,
    to giant shadow silhouettes

    Adventure meets us our every turn,
    for pirate’s treasure we now search
    Seems we’ve found old Captain Jack,
    he was hiding in the church

    Taking us to sail the seas,
    to distant China we make our way
    Finding your brand new kingdom,
    preparing for the coronation day

    And it’s a party that we can’t believe,
    just like the circus is in town
    With all the fireworks and animals,
    so many colors and strange sounds

    Today princess you are the queen,
    your loved by everyone around
    Thank you for the wonderful trip,
    and that big smile that I found



    For Lilly with heavy heart, the world will be a lesser place, Rick


  • catz Moderators member
    September 3

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    So sad, this little girl and yet the happiness she could feel is as heartwarming as her death is heartwrenching.
    Thank you for showing her such love and compassion in her last hours. I think she must be smiling down on you from Heaven... You, her very special angel.

    Dee


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    September 3
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    I am seriously too choked up to say anything, Tory, except that you are a wonderful and exceptional woman.


  • Legend silver member
    September 2

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    I hate this beast I have had many run ins with it.That it has the nerve to attack one so young and innocent is beyond my comprehension
    I can not pray for i have no religious leanings ( do you wonder why)
    My thoughts though are with you who added a little joy and comfort to such a tragic little girl. I have read the add on Jeff put and as the father of three wonderful girls it breaks my heart to think of any parent have so little love for their child that they could walk away at such a time
    I must stop i am getting really angry

    My applaus will be for your kindness and not for a wonderful moving write

  • my dear sweet sister I am so glad that Lilly had you she needed you and you did her and now you will always always have eachother!!!! I am so glad that she died happy and holding onto you!!!! She is a wonderful angel and smiling down on you right now!!! I write this all in tears but I know she is very very happy!!!!! You are so wonderful dear one and you have a heart of gold!!! I know that lilly deeply appreciated this piece and that6 you made a very sad girl very very happy!!!!! I love you immensley my dear sweet sister you are so wonderful to me!!!!!!!!! I wish I had payed attention to Jeff's message sooner or I would not have sent all those other messages!!!!! Well just know that I love and care for you and your in my thoughts and in my prayers sweetheart!!!!!! lots and lots of love!!!!!!! ur lil sis Jewel


  • cricketjeff gold member
    September 2

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    An angel isn't from beyond the grave
    An angel's one who'll walk the final mile
    You met a girl so beautiful and brave
    And for a while you showed her how to smile

    A little girl with no-one who would care
    You gave her more than anyone can give
    You have such love that you're prepared to share
    For just a while you showed her how to live

    In just days you changed her heart around
    She laughed for you when tears were all she knew
    And at the very end your princess found
    That love is real and looks a lot like you

    You have to weep, each child deserves our tears
    But Tory, you removed an angel's fears


  • JohnnyD gold member
    September 2

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    Tory,

    you know I grieve for Lilly and for your loss of that lovely little girl. yet, for the last two days or so you two gave each other the greatest gift of all "love", deep and unconditional.

    Tory, "you" were Lilly's Angel,
    and now-she is yours forever.

    rest assured Lilly is OK
    and still loving you
    as you are her.

    Love

    Len


  • lynda
    September 2
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    tears

    what a blessing that you found each other ..even for the short time by earthly standards...it will last forever for you both


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    September 2

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    Tory, my love goes out to you and Lilly. Your poem for her is so full of love and emotions and I'm at a loss for words ... all I can say is that at least she is at peace now, knowing that she was loved by you.

    Please Tory, take care.
    Love
    Sue
    x

  • My dear sweet lily I have Faith that God will make you better!!!! Be Strong and Trust in Him alone to take care of you!!! There are so many people that love you and need you especially Tory you make her so very happy!!!! So get well soon my dear!!! You are in my thoughts and in my prayers!!! I want to get you and miss Tory a present so if you have anything in particular you want tell Tory and she can tell me!!!!! I love you and hope and pray you will be well again soon!!!! Sending lots and lots of love!!!!!

    • I am so sorry Lilly I accidentally mispelled your name up there but don't worry I will get it right I promise you!!!! I love you!!!!!! Give tory a big hug and tell her I love her Too!!!!!!!!


  • Bianca Melody
    September 2

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    so sad.
    my heart really goes out to princess lilly.
    but thankfully she died happy, and now she's where she belongs with all the other angels.
    tory, you're a wonderful person for being there for this little girl. it was a great thing that you did.
    and this poem really did the situation justice. very well penned.

    rest in peace princess lilly.

    love
    bianca melody.
    xx


  • schoolsable
    September 2

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    awww... soo sad

    Princess Lilly now lies in God's arms
    makin all the other angels smile
    including God...


  • evershine-90
    September 2
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    Rest in Peace beautiful Princess Lilly


  • robert bolin
    September 2

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    When an angel is taken away from us here on earth, they are sent to heaven to help care for the innocence that has been stolen from one and all, sorry for your tragedy but beautifully penned.


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    September 2
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    Tory
    I just saw the update by Jeff...
    I'm sorry Tory, I wished I had the
    strenght last night to write her my poem below
    Why!!!!!!
    RIP little angel


  • Nickelspring gold member
    September 2

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    An angel released from the pain of this life to fly free.
    K

  • firefly star
    September 2
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    aww this is so sad and heart breaking. Princess Lilly. My twin sister is called Lilly. God bless you, rest in peace.

  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    September 2

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    Sending Some Love

    Princess Lilly, you’re in our hearts and minds
    sweet angel, you’re are precious and kind
    If you are feeling weak darling, that’s Ok
    because you have friends along the way

    Tory told us about you, a brave little girl
    you’re an inspiration all around the world
    Don’t fret loved one, be mighty and strong
    we’ll be with you in our dreams all night long

    You’re never alone Lilly, angels are near
    one spoke to me and said tell Lilly not to fear
    We can’t hide the truth, cancer is a bad thing
    but you can beat this if you laugh and sing

    I bring to you a magical gift to keep
    it will keep nightmares away while you sleep
    A little and are also for you
    they’ll make you smile when you’re feeling blue

    Look, a fish and a bunny /*
    hehehehehe aren’t they just funny
    See, a few smiles will make you feel better
    just remember that you’re not alone, we’re all together

    You’re in our prayers both day and night
    we’re by your side to help win this fight
    Hush, don’t tell the nurses, I snuck you a cake
    just a little late night snack while you’re awake

    Don’t worry dear; the Lord will be with you
    along with all of us on AP and sweet Tory too
    Now rest Princess Lilly and have sweet dreams
    they’ll be angels here under the moonbeams

    We love you Princess Lilly

    Your friend
    David









    • PassionsPromise gold member
      September 3
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      Oh god i am in tears she would of loved this
      thank you David...

      Much love always


  • KitLynn
    September 1

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    Dear Lilly,

    Keep your head up high. I know many people who have had cancer. Some were taken too early, and the rest fought their way through. You have so much to live for, and I have the faith that you will grow old and have many happy days.
    This poem brought tears to my eyes. So very sweet. Honestly, the title is what made me read it. I have a step daughter named Lily that was taken away (by her mother). So I have a soft spot for little girls named Lily. And I know how important it is to hold on to all of the little princess' in this world, especially the ones that need it the most.
    You will be in my thoughts, Princess Lilly.

    <3 KitLynn


  • mysticstorm gold member
    September 1

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    Lilly,
    You have so much love holding on to you...
    Tory shall hold you tight no matter what...
    and you shall know the love from her 10 fold and more...
    you are an angel getting ready to fly...
    so tell them all you are and will always be...
    as all questions you ever had will be answered...
    in words of truth and love...
    sweet Lilly!


  • LadyElbereth
    September 1

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    Lilly

    Lovely little girl
    In ivy you will play
    Laughter when you’re tickled
    Lillie, laughter all your day
    You are loved little Angel


    My little Lillie Poem just for you …get well little darling I will keep you in my prayers…always!

    Hugs…Catherine


  • JinSays gold member
    September 1

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    all I can say is I hope you love her as long as you can, as much as you can.
    I dont really have much more to say than that, the lump in my throat is too big.
    love you always tory,
    jin


  • glenn shannon silver member
    September 1

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    absolutly chilling and so sad i know how easly it is to become attached to the young suffering as i am with sam i am now anter darlin is struck by this horrid cancer . GOD watch over our children and take them home peacefully if you must . a beautiful write here Tory that makes the heart bleed and blesss you to just devine work and tears flow heavy . peace and love dear one .


  • AbundantBetrayals
    September 1

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    She sounds like a beautiful young lady and her spirit seems to suit her beautiful name. A lily is thought to protect gardens from evil and therefore her name was bestowed upon her to protect her spirit in her battle against cancer, the lily is innocence, purity and good fortune.
    You will be in my thoughts lovely lady Lilly
    strength to you,
    Blessed be,
    ~Betrayals

  • my dear precious girl I sure hope that you will feel better soon you will be in my thoughts and prayers!!!!!! May The Lord Bless you and Keep you and Protect you and give you Peace always!!!!! I am so glad that you and Tory are so close she is such a dear sweet woman and I consider her my own dear sister and I would love to be friends with you too I love meeting new people!!!!!! Love and hugs always!!!!!! Sincerely Leesey aka Jewel


  • Griswold
    September 1

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    This is very tender and heartwarming sweetheart. You told me about her and that you wanted to write to her. I pray she is doing well and comes swiftly back to your side. You owe her a teddy bear you know. Love you... Scott

    Lilly, I'm Ms. Tory's friend Scott, she told me about you, you mean a lot to her. Keep her safe for me will you? And give her a hug and a kiss too, she needs it as bad as you do.

    • PassionsPromise gold member
      September 1
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      Thank you Scott,
      I didnt get her a bear, i got her a wig she had a head wrap (hankie) wrapped around her head. Said she wanted her hair back so we went and got one. (I know people)

      Again, I appreciate your love and support to Lilly

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