There within the woods as the mist began to fall
came the whisper of silence
from the tree tops parrasol...
It was a crisping leaf, dried up in the autumn's sun
and just then I had the thought
that winter is next to come.
In a list
A contest entry
- Turn a picture prompt into 6 lines by J Macabre.
1200 points, ended September 3, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ethereal...
I love this "elemental" poem, you write on nature so well...!! And, I could even sense the presence of all the little people of the Irish forest mists, hiding beneath the silence... 
Wishing you all the best in the contest, Poet!! 
Peace, Love & Hugs,
xx Cyn xx
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beautiful poem
you must have a beautiful mind to pen these lovely lines:
from the tree tops parrasol...
It was a crisping leaf, dried up in the autumn's sun
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Very Well Done! Love the flow and the picture goes well with it.
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As usual, your words bring a smile to my face.
I do so love how you rhyme... always in awe
Love you
Juls
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Very pretty write. nice picture choice as well. I like your first two lines alot.
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Beautiful
I love this simple beautiful artistic poem. I feel as if I am in that misty forest, I hear the crunch sound of that crisping leaf. I love this part......
"came the whisper of silence
from the tree tops parrasol.." .. lovely =)
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This is beautiful, but winter IS next to come and I am NOT ready. Such a lovely six lines.
Buddy
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