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You Have Them All

You have my mind
Because it's constantly thinking of you
You have my belly
Now that butterflies are living in it
You have my soul
Because I'm always yearning to be next to you
You have my heart
Now that I think that
...I love you
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© Lislaine Bermudez

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  • XXHardToLoveXx
    September 14
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    it's so short and sweet which makes me that much more able to enjoy it. Return the favor?


  • stephilou
    September 9

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    "Now that butterflies are living in it"...
    I like that a lot


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    September 8

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    I love the tender simplicity of this....and the line....you have my belly now that butterflies are living in it ..just blew me away...this poem rocks majorly...so majorly that i am gonna have to bookmark it...nice write
    T


  • Hija of the King
    September 3

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    i luv it. the picture. the text formatting. the message. everything! its absolutely great and AWESOME!

  • Bob 42 silver member
    September 3
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    Thank you, Lislaine

    I`m so glad you enjoyed my poem 'You'


  • his kiss
    September 2
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    Luv it!


  • starving4perfection
    September 2

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    awww short and sweet......i loved it
    well done! great job


  • sgking123
    September 2
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    wow

    that was unique and well done........mind,belly soul,,,,you are damn right


  • Stardust Memories
    September 2

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    Very emotional, and I loved every bit of this piece.
    I think the picture goes very well with this too, and the ending just ties the poem together. This was sweet and simple, great poem. It shows you have allot of love in your heart.


  • Melissa23R
    September 1
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    Aaaww.. eta frkn sweet
    ma guste hopii
    e pic tmb ta masturr
    ma love it!! (:

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