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black licorice

the time goes on without a stare,
no hugs, no love, no care.
just like black licorice.

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  • LionessK silver member
    September 8

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    welcome to allpoetry

    Interesting indeed...
    My mother always liked black licorice.
    I hope you will continue to write and share your thoughts here with us all.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 3

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    welcome to all poetry

    This is an interesting comparison, I love the first two lines, not sure I get the meaning behind the last. Welcome to the site.

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  • lolaiscool
    September 1
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    lovely.

    lola, you are quite a poet.