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Summer

Summer warmth kissed her skin
Summer joy washed her sins

Summer life made her smile
Summer moments was worthwhile

Summer memories found her love
Summer gave gifts from above

Summer fun she holds so dear
Summer kisses so sincere

Summer problems made her doubt
Summer time had made her shout

Summer boy broke her heart
Summer love tore her apart

Summer sadness stole her breath
Summer pain caused her death

I started reading a book, and I had to write a poem about it. Is it good?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • rockchick93
    September 8

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    Good!

    I think it turned out well!
    I am very curious, what book is this?