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Fully Alive

Scrawled across the top of my hand
is the phrase ALIVE

These days it is what I wish
that I felt inside

I wonder around reminiscing about the one I miss
remembering how my life came to this

Seeing stars and spinning out of control
recalling the days that I felt whole

He was the one who kept me sane
but, now he's gone and tears fall like rain

Scrawled across the top of my hand
is the phrase ALIVE

Something I'll never FULLY feel cause I cannot be revived

I've died inside

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