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For my beloved sister, KC (okadadokie)

My sister, you’re an angel
You don’t deserve this fate
You don’t deserve this agony
Though we’re miles apart
And oceans separate us
You’re on my mind
This pain that you feel, I feel it too
Your anguish is mine to share
I know that my words cannot stop your suffering
Though I wish they could
My love is merely a plaster on your broken heart
It cannot heal your wound
But I just want you to know that you are not alone
I’m right here and this pain we shall share
I’ll be your candle in the darkness
I’ll show you the way
I love you sis, please keep the faith

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I love you to bits sissy..

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  • I (used to) know Oka! :O

    Hey this is a really sweet and loving write. Though I am not sure what she is going through right now, she's got my hand too. She was always such a nice person, good to talk to, and I can tell you must be too. Thanks for opening up and sharing this caring poem!

  • angelelectra
    September 4

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    Instead of being jealous (lol) I ended up with tears in my eyes! She's really very lucky to have you. Wonderful poem!!


  • okadadokie
    September 2

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    Thank you so much Newy, I love you, your the best. Thank you for being here with me through this, I'll never forget this.

    ~Your wolfy sis

  • Honey Bunches
    September 2

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    Wow, ummm..... This is some deep stuff. I love it. You're showing your creative, yet sensitive side. I feel your pain when I read this piece, and that's what you want people to do. Especially, if you're going to post it online.... You see what I'm saying. You are a very talented writer and I feel that your faith will carry you on. Not only to have faith in your sister, but have faith in yourself. Great Job! .... And.... You are beautiful