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Who You Were

And I'm gonna sit here..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Right here on this little bench, by this little tree..
I'm going to sit until the tears stop falling..
Until you make them stop dripping down my face.
Until you are the guy I fell in love with from the start.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


I deserve better.
We both know this.
Just something about you..
I can't let go..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


I guess I was already over my head..
You saw my weakness and took advantage.
I would take it all back,
Were I given the chance.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Put all the little tears
Back into my little body..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


But I'm still sitting here..
On this little bench, by this little tree..
Wondering who you used to be..

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  • evershine-90
    September 25

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    wow, i can really relate to this piece, brings tears to my eyes, gosh stupid me
    This is really touching and moving, i feel the pain and sadness and the last line really hit me "wondering who you used to be.." Great work!!


  • AbundantBetrayals
    September 1

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    Easily relatable...sadly i know exactly how the speaker in this poem feels since i'm going though the same thing at this very moment. If i could take back the tears and pain he caused me ... that i caused myself by staying i would. Your words were lovely wonderfully written.
    ~Betrayals