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Fuel for Life

Obsessed
In love with air
Scents alone arrest
It is hardly fair

Time holds hostages
Prisoners of a word
Resuming with less
Only more is unheard

So let this grow past
Let infinity exceed
Memories ever last
Burns insane need

Inspired by lust & the Diesel parfume "Fuel for Life"

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  • mspider50
    September 24
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    very well done.


  • Melee Vau gold member
    September 8

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    heaven scent

    like this poetic exploration of memories and how they are evoked by scent, words, etc.  liked the perfume references and rhyme.