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Doesn't Make Sense

You and me
can’t figure this out

Pushing each other
    against the wall
Bring our lips
    inches apart

We have this thing
between us
that we try to block

When you try to talk
well…
      Making sense just isn’t your thing, is it?

It sure as hell isn’t mine

Why we don’t drop it all
    is something we can’t figure out

We let others
get in our way
even when we try to say
              “I want you
                              …now”

Just doesn’t make sense
And we never will

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