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my chance

i go out of my way to make you happy
have you made me happy
do you love me

i love you
i tell you all the time
do you love me

give me it all
make me yours
make me happy
do you love me

can you say it
or do you want to wait
i gave you my all
do you love me

you said it finally
you gave me your love
you gave me your all
you love me

i love you

Michael Jackson's is gone but not forgotten

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    October 30
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    Heartfelt lyrical sentiment to this piece...well done!


  • awannabepoet
    October 30
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    quite the lyrical vibe in this piece, excellent thank you so much for sharing this little gem.




  • mgmc gold member
    October 30

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    I also got a lyrical feeling and a strong heartfelt one. Nicely write! MJ was very talented but being a star seems far from easy to me and for all the possessions his life seemed to be a difficult one. All the best!


  • Xianaria gold member
    October 30

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    I enjoyed the lyrical feel to this piece, a fitting dedication to MJ ~ or anyone important to ones' heart.

    Nicely done & congrats on being featured!

    ~ Tim


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 30

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    I so love micheal Jackson. he was a stellar performer
    and it grieved my heart to know that he was taken from
    our lifes so early, his memory will live on, he was a legend
    in his time. you are feature Cloe. this write was written
    with a tenderness and love ssss
    love and blessings
    Rend
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  • Ostria
    September 22
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    I LOVE YOU TOO MOLLY <3~ X

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