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I. Love. You

    I may not be here in person, but

    Look in your heart
    Open it to me with
  eVery tear you cry
      Every fear you fight

      Your angel is here with
      Open arms
      Until we meet again, i wanted you to know that...


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Read all the Caps, and that is what he wanted to tell you

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  • Bruce silver member
    October 16
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    I like it! One question: should there be a capital Vee in the third line?


  • In.Your.Arms
    September 5
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    i can say i relate, but unfortunately thats bad for me. most ppl love love, i hate it.