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Fall

F - Fall has come and
A - Angels sing as
L - Leaves change colours of their
L - Love for all of us

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    October 25

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    This acrostic expresses just what I felt as my brother and I drove down the Hope Princeton highway last weekend! The fall colors of aspen, birch and maples through the Cascade mountains made it a breath taking journey...So proud of Canada...Thanks for this acrostic!


  • Sandygram
    September 25

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    Wonderful Acrostic

    Well I see the Acrostic King is at it again. And you have written of my very favorite season. This is lovely Edward. A delight to read this morning . Hugs and Smiles,

    Take Care, Sandy


  • condor gold member
    September 6

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    Acrostics are not my favourite type of poem but occasionally a piece comes along that captures the eye and this is just what this piece did. Not only did it give one a sense of beauty in the words used but showed how wonderful fall could be with its sensational changes that seem to capture us all with its delightful beauty. Fantastic!


  • Sonja
    September 3

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    This is just another example what you can do with your acrostic beauty with only a few lines. I am glad to see you back to poetry.
    ~Sonja~


  • angelinus
    September 2
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    Fall a colorfull season

    I take it you like the fall
    with all its brilliant colors
    To add angels to this verse
    proves it
    HUGS MY FRIEND


  • JoyfulWriter
    September 1

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    Beautiful!

    Your words really make this poem shine! So like the colors of Fall and the immense beauty they possess...enjoyed reading this...truly a seasonal post....thanks for letting me read...take care of you...smiles, Terry


  • TrixieOne
    September 1
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    I love the fall!!! A great piece


  • SandraMVeinot
    September 1

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    ah the taste of Autumn,
    is in the air and brings beauty; yes.
    you have stated this
    to the gentle side of sweetness.

    thank you for the beautiful read today here.
    and may the day be lovely there for you too as well.

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