I want to be free,
Breath the air,
Feel emotion,
Feel some pain.
I want to smell the roses,
I need to know some sanity,
I feel like I am alone, by myself,
I just want to be free again.
My world keeps on shrinking,
Into everlasting loneliness,
Drifting away from all reality,
Into a broken boulevard.
I am lonely,
Only me in this,
Nobody to talk to,
Just my thoughts.
I spend my life reflecting,
On memories of good old days,
Remembering what I never missed,
Until this very empty world.
I am trapped.
I can't escape.
This mindscape,
Is my world.
Author notes
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Nice job conveying the feeling of being both trapped and alone. I think that many can relate to this. Best of luck getting out of your entrapment and good luck in the contest.
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Wow, this was very well done! The imagery was excellent and I felt you in that 'bubble'
Thank You so much and Good Luck
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