Wind, wind
so cold wind.
The wind so fast,
wind so slow.
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Written April 2nd, 2004
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Your talent is growing with you, I can see with the right encouragement you are going to get that muse working overtime and you are going to get those poems posted and I wont be able to catch up with you. A wonderful job with this one, simple and effective............
take care
sanity.
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you are a great poet. i like this poem very much and am going to add you to my favorites list.
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you could be an awesome haiku writer, you really have a gift for describing nature in a simple but profound way. awesome poem, keep it up!!
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Great I hope you never lose you pen, Keep up the great work.
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That old wind just can't seem to make up it's mind, can it. A god poem, Jer, the imagery is very good. I posted a poem about the wind today, but it's just one of those sorta lovey dovey love lost kind. Your's, though is natural and awesome
Very good write
Dee
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Thank you.
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BEAUTIFUL! jer great poem i like the part the wind so fast,
the wind so slow,
that part was awesome I liked it very much! thank you for sharing
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I like your style! Beautiful job!
Peace and love
Susan
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Thank you very much.
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You're going to be a great writer - I see it already! Just like mom
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This is beautiful. You use excellent descriptive words. Great job. I am proud of you.
love you
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