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Love and Death

Devistation on his face
as he stands over her,
Her face is white,
hands and cold as ice,
A tear rolls down his face.
He takes her hand,
has he lays next to her still body,
and says goodnight to his
Sleeping beauty.
Wishing he could of been
Prince Charming,
instead of a Beast,
as he closes his eyes one last time.

Author notes

kindof had the idea of this poem, but never actually written a word of it down, not knowing how to word it. then one night i woke up, and just started writing. I now am happier with the desicion to keep a poetry and writing notebooks aside of my bed. XD tell me what you think.

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  • Rixy Ravage
    September 2

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    wow, i really like this.
    the story of how he wishes to be the good guy instead of the bad is wonderful,
    you did a wonderful job :]

    ♥
    Rixy