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~Kaledoscope voices~




Kaleidoscope voices dance
within the webs of  a mind
held hostage in memories 
from a life that once was.

Earth becomes home
as silence slices
through darkness
at the cluck of the last crow.

And mortality is no longer
as sadness grows.












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  • Legend silver member
    September 1

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    I was in the mind of the deceased as i read this piece.I am sure it was their voice that was speaking.I can imagine the feeling of sadness growing, knowing that ones life had ended
    Good luck in the contest
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